Dear Jordan,
Your writing about Frederick Douglass was helpful to us because we are learning about him too. We learned that if Frederick Douglass did not communicate his ideas about ending slavery there might be slavery today. Thank you Jordan.
This is my Frederick Douglass writing: Frederick Douglass made a huge contribution to society and was a great communicator and collaborator, but how? Contributions to society come in big and small sizes, and Frederick Douglass made a big contribution to society when he helped free all of the slaves in the South. Communicating and collaborating is a hard thing to do, but Frederick Douglass did it very easily. How you may ask? Well, he created a newspaper and became the advisor for President Lincoln! He also convinced President Lincoln to create the Emancipation Proclamation. This document stated that anybody who lived in the South could not own slaves. In conclusion, Frederick Douglass was a great man and made many contributions to society. Benedict Arnold was forgotten in history because did not do anything good. Frederick Douglass on the other hand, did so many good deeds he will never be forgotten in history.
Sincerely,
Jordan Reyes-Wade
I have recently watched the video on Frederick Douglass and I believe that there are some mistakes. The first one is, we were talking to fast and that caused us to stumble on our words.Also, something we need to improve is not clicking the keys loudly so the computer doesn’t pick it up.So that is something that needs to be fixed in later presentations.
Dear Jordan,
Your writing about Frederick Douglass was helpful to us because we are learning about him too. We learned that if Frederick Douglass did not communicate his ideas about ending slavery there might be slavery today. Thank you Jordan.
Sincerely,
Danielle Villa and Azlynn Long
Dear Mr.Miller
This is my Frederick Douglass writing: Frederick Douglass made a huge contribution to society and was a great communicator and collaborator, but how? Contributions to society come in big and small sizes, and Frederick Douglass made a big contribution to society when he helped free all of the slaves in the South. Communicating and collaborating is a hard thing to do, but Frederick Douglass did it very easily. How you may ask? Well, he created a newspaper and became the advisor for President Lincoln! He also convinced President Lincoln to create the Emancipation Proclamation. This document stated that anybody who lived in the South could not own slaves. In conclusion, Frederick Douglass was a great man and made many contributions to society. Benedict Arnold was forgotten in history because did not do anything good. Frederick Douglass on the other hand, did so many good deeds he will never be forgotten in history.
Sincerely,
Jordan Reyes-Wade
Dear Jordan,
Thank you for the submission; I found your comparison particularly interesting.
Feedback: In the future, make certain to place a comma after your salutation.
Sincerely,
Mr. Miller
Dear Mr.Miller,
I have recently watched the video on Frederick Douglass and I believe that there are some mistakes. The first one is, we were talking to fast and that caused us to stumble on our words.Also, something we need to improve is not clicking the keys loudly so the computer doesn’t pick it up.So that is something that needs to be fixed in later presentations.
Sincerely,
Isabelle Baginski