Dear Peers,
I would like to show you my question for today!
Yesterday,we were reading a document on cell theory,and I
have a question on it.The cell theory document was something cool to learn about,but it was review.My question is that What are spaces in a cork? Also, how did Robert Hooke find the cells in the cork?This was my writing on my cell theory document!
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Jenk,
I would suggest to have a more interesting topic sentence to make your writing a more quality piece. Also to make a conclusion sentence but try to use something different then to conclude.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth
Dear Elizabeth,
You said to use something different then to conclude,but I didn’t use to conclude so I think you should double check your feedback.Also you said “Also to make a conclusion sentence but try to use something different then to conclude.It doesn’t really make sense.
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Mr. Miller and Peers,
For our daily question or comment I would like to present something that I have learned!
Learning is something that happens to you everyday, and I think it is very important. One thing that I learned was that you can weigh different on other planets. That task was valuable because it got me thinking about how scientists can figure out what the gravitational force on different planets. I will do some research on how scientists did there investigations to find out the different gravitational pulls of each planet. I will report back as soon as I acquire my results.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Batiste
Dear Peers,
I would like to show you my comment of today for what I’ve learned!
Mr.Miller has gave my class a comma worksheet,and after I worked on it I improved by a lot! This comma worksheet has turned me trying to remember to put a comma to it being a skill.Now whenever I write a sentence I’m allows putting the comma in the right spot now! Thanks to this document it has helped me a lot!
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Jenk,
I liked how you put your fact that you learned from yesterday, but you have some mistakes. When you were saying that the comma worksheet has changed you from trying to remember to put a comma in to it being a skill, I think that you should of added “from” in your sentence right in between “me” and “turned”. In addition, in the sentence when you said “Now whenever I write a sentence I’m allows putting the comma in the right spot now.” were you trying to say “Now whenever I write a sentence it allows me to put the comma in the right spot.”?
I respect both of your efforts in the blog, I also think it’s a great thing that people are using the blog for many things. However, I would like to correct both of you on, the spelling of always. In both your paragraphs you spelt always as “allows”.
Dear Nick Barbieri,
I noticed that you made some mistakes in your last blog entry. First, at the beginning of your fourth sentence you started with a lower-case “w”, instead of an upper-case “w”. Also, you forgot to put sincerely, Nick Barbieri at the end of the blog entry.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Thomas Jefferson was a very interesting person and I learned lots of things about him. Such as before he died he had his tombstone made and he engraved his accomplishments into the tombstone. I found this interesting because he did not engrave that he was the third president of the United States and I think that is one of his greatest accomplishments. There are many more facts I know about Thomas Jefferson, but do you know any?
Dear Peers,
I would like to show you my rough draft of my learning target!
Learning Target
These are two of my many learning targets I want to achieve this year.My learning target for my 5th grade class is to improve in math and science because they are my favorite subjects in school.I also chose them because they are really important subjects in life and school!Math and science are sometimes used together like in science to figure out problems to create an invention or a theory you would need to use math to help you in scientific problems. Well, as you can see I really want to improve in math and science this year!
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
I would like to mostly inform Trout members but even if your not in the trout group I suggest you read this. If you search in ‘ Parts of a microscope’ you can print a sheet out and fill in the blanks to know parts of a microscope.( That document will be found if you click on ” parts of a microscope icon’.) Knowing the parts of the microscope will be useful because I believe soon we will use a microscope in class, so why not receive a head start to learning about a microscope and how to use it. This document will also be efficient to trout team members because just like today ( January 5th 2016) we observed trout under a microscope. I hope you find this document useful.
Dear Peers,
I have just wanted to say if you are in the Problem Solvers team Mini Elections are tomorrow.Wonder who will be leader!!
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Peers,
I think that more people should get on the blog more. So in my free time I am going to try to ask people to get on the blog. I suggest to try to do the same, including the students in our E.L.A class. I would like to do this because I feel that more people should get on the blog and post a comment about something to show your diligence and writing skills. Also, about the students in the E.L.A class if they are getting on the blog, try to get them to post a comment to show that you get on the blog.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Anthony,
Speaking of more E.L.A. peers getting on the blog, some E.L.A. peers are coming up for lunch and some are even joining trout! If they are going to join trout, they are going to have go on the blog, and the first time I went on the blog I was watching videos and looking at comments for at least 30 minutes. So they are probably going to do the same thing.
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear Nick,
I saw that the E.L.A kids came up for extra help, I also saw that Justin, and Elizabeth (e.t.c)were helping them post a comment. I posted the comment because I’ve looked on evry part of the blog to see if the E.L.A kids had posted a comment. Also, I wasn’t only referring to the E.L.A kids, I also spoke to two people to try to get on the blog they said that they get just don’t post, I said the way to prove that is by posting a comment. I hope that the people that I spoke to fallow my advice.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear MrMiller,
I know its not the perfect time to join trout but I am very interested in trout.I have wanted to join trout for awhile but I did not know if it was right for me.I have had fish for a long time and I have always helped my dad clean the tank.I think it would be very interesting to learn about the bacteria Ph that forms in the trout tank .If I can learn about trout and everything that forms in the tank if I get trout in the future I will already know all about the tank.
Dear Mr. Miller,
I would like to be one of the writers for the class paper. I would like to because it would help me write neater and help me write in script more fluently. It would also, increase my vocabulary, and would make me think harder before I write. Finally, it would force me to re-read more than three times, and when I’m re-reading it would make me look for more than does it make sense, does it have correct vocabulary, and does it have correct punctuation.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Nick Barbieri and Peers,
Thank you for the wish of good luck and good luck to you that you win speaker of the house, and good luck to all peers.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear peers,
I wish you guys all of luck tomorrow for the elections, I hope you guys have really good speeches and get the position that you guys want. Good luck!
Sincerely,
Nick barbieri
Dear Anthony,
In the text it said you will be reading about the 8 European explorers who came to the Americas. Anthony it says the Americas because there talking about the North America and the South America.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth Suda
Dear Elizabeth,
When you wrote the response to the question I asked you forgot to put quotation marks at the beginning and end of the answer. You would need to quotations at the beginning and end of the answer because it came from the text, therefore, you would need quotations.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
P.S.
Thank you for the answer
Dear Mr. Miller,
In the social studies text it said” in chapter 5 you read about eight European explores who came to the Americas”. Why dose the text say Americas?
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear peers,
I would just like to remind you guys that we have a complex quiz tomorrow on pages 73-79. I suggest that you reread and study those pages. Good luck!
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear Mr. Miller,
When we were going over the Three Branches of the U.S. Government before you said that if you didn’t finish the document to do it for homework, I did question five at the rug.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr. Miller and Peers,
I would like to come in for extra help tomorrow to work on character traits. I suggest to come in if you need to work on character traits to come in or if you need additional help with anything else.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
P.S.
Computer lab time stars at 8:30, and extra help starts at 8:00.
Dear Anthony Jean-Baptiste,
When you were writing your P.S. note, you spelled starts wrong. You spelled stars instead of starts.
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear Mr. Miller,
I forgot my homework folder in the classroom, is there any way I can go on a scholastic news website or can I make it up in class?
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear Mr. Miller,
You know how we have to go on Raz – kids each week. Are we aloud to change our robot and design our rocket. Or would we be only aloud to read and take tests.
Sincerely,
Olina
Dear Mr. Miller,
I would like to present my character traits writing piece. Character traits are great aspects to have if you are part of history or not. Character traits are what makes you; you. If you are part of history you would plenty of character traits. Being a courageous person if you are part of history is a great achievement. It is a good character trait because if you have to go to court you need to have the courage win also you need to have fear to have courage and you might be fearful that you are not going to win, but if keep on believing in your self and showing courage you might just win. Showing courage is a great aspect to show. Courage can help you with many goals in life. As you can see, if you are part of history or not, being courageous and showing courage is a great character trait to have, even if it shows that you are a little scared.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr. Miller and Peers,
In my character traits writing I made a few mistakes. First, I forgot to put to between courage and win. Second, I forgot need between would and plenty. Finally, I forgot to put a comma after win in the sentence when I said, if you are going to court you would need to have the courage to win, also you need to have fear to have courage.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr. Miller:
I have a question, remember that you said that the plates
make earthquakes and volcanos, so how the plates makes tsunamis.
Thank you for your colaboration.
Sincerely,
Xavier Piedra.
Dear Xavier, I noticed when you asked your question you wrote ‘so how the plates make tsunamis’.The correct way to say the sentence would be ‘so how do the plates make tsunamis’.I also believe that I can answer your question. I think that the plates don’t cause tsunamis. I think that the earthquakes that plates cause, make the tsunamis happen. Sincerely, Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr.Miller, I would like to be someone to manage the sports games. I would like to join because it seems like a really fun job to have. I would also like to join because it would help increase my memory skills. Sincerely, Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Currently, Jordan and Sophia have assumed the role of commissioners. However, should they require additional help, your name will be first on the list.
Dear Mr.Miller and peers ,
May I come in for the computer extra help?I want to finish up my numbers chart and paragraph.Peers if you want to finish up or start your numbers you could come in for computer extra help.And also we will be starting up baseball next week or tomorrow.If anyone wants to join that would be great because we need more people to join in order to play the game.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng.
Dear Mr.Miller,
Justin and I would be coming in for extra help with the third graders.We will be all coming in at 8:00.Our cohort wanted to finish our design process chart in order to start engineering.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Mr. Miller,
On the website I founded the page that was about Roanoke.There was a lot of facts that didn’t really make sence. Like there was this fact about queen Elizabeth giving Sir Walter Raleigh a charter. At first I didn’t know what charter means bit then I looked it up in the dictionary.Charter means to hire[as a bus or an aircraft]for temporary use.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear peers,
I would just like to remind you there is a quiz on geography. There might be a quiz on the pages we read the previous day in your science fusion text book.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth Suda
Last week I was not able to post a comment on the blog,
so I would like to share my thoughts about how it went. I feel
I have learned a fantastic amount of information during E.L.A.,
like the words adhere and ascend. Adhere means to stick or
follow speaking figuratively. Ascend means to rise or go up.
I have also learned in math double division and I reviewed long
division. There is so many things I learned that I can’t share them all
in this comment.
Dear Mr.Miller,
I found the answer to my question,”is Denmark part of Greenland?”. The answer is that Greenland is a province of Denmark.
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear,Mr. Miller
Today you asked me what gives glue it’s adhesive properties . I have done research and come up with an answer. My answer is adhesion . Adhesion is when liquid molecules stick to other types of molecules . This force force makes glue stick to objects such as paper, metal and wood .
Sincerely, Jacob
Dear Mr.Miller
Today was good and quick. I hope everyday is like this, this week. I also wanted to say that I would hopefully attend extra help more often. One more thing is that I will study hard for quizzes because I want to keep up my good scores.🙂
Sincerely,
Nicholas McBride
Dear, Peers
I would like to remind you all that we have a timeline and Vikings worksheet quiz tomorrow. For this quiz I would like give you all good luck. P.S. Don’t forget to study!😉
Sincerely, Jacob Gabel
Dear Jacob Gabel,
Thank you for reminding the class about the timeline quiz . I appreciate you for reminding the class about the timeline quiz but I noticed that you made a mistake in your comment. When you wrote “dear peers” you wrote the comma after the dear . Where you was were supposed to put the comma was after the dear peers.
Sincerely，Olina Zheng😊
Dear Jake Neira,
When you posted your comment about the class discussion you capitilized the whole thing.I also noticed that you forgot to write “Sincerely,Jake Neira or Jake.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Paige Driscoll,
Thank you for the video on latitude and longitude lines.I thought that the video was cool and I learned a lot from the video.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Mr. Miller,
I really like the rounding we are doing in math, at first I didn’t really understand it but now it’s starting to come through easier and I’m very glad I do. Another thing that I wanted to say is I plan on going to extra help tomarrow,I wanted to catch up in some things.
Sincerely,
Nicholas McBride
Dear Luis Maximo,
Thank You for reminding the whole class about the geography quiz and wishing them good luck!
I realized that when you wrote “Sincerly Luis Maximo” you spelled sincerely wrong.The sincerely you spelled was sincerly but how you really spell it is S-i-n-c-e-r-e-l-y.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Mr.Miller
For the flame challenge I would like to do sound . I picked sound because sound is an interesting topic and there is so much to learn abouut it! That is why I will Pick sound.
Dear Elizabeth,
I noticed that when you wrote a comment to Makayla you made a mistake. When you wrote “Dear Makayla” you forgot to put a comma after Makayla.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Mr.Miller,
I would like to do what is sound because sound is everywhere and sound could save you’r life.
If there was a car or train coming if there was no sound you would get ran over.
It also seems very interesting.
Dear Mr.Miller,
I found the answer to the question that you asked me in literacy block today. The answer is that penguins are warm blooded. So now I can ask the question to ponder in literacy block.
Dear Mr.Miller,
I will express interest in the flame challenge beacause I like grading stuff and playing teacher. Plus science is my most favorite subject so this is a great opportunity for the class, and this is deffidently somthing to be apart of!
Dear Mr. Miller,
I would like to do the flame challenge because I like science. I think it would be very interesting to see scientists and their works of science. Also I think it would be good experience for me. Thank you.
Dear Peers,
I would like to show you my question for today!
Yesterday,we were reading a document on cell theory,and I
have a question on it.The cell theory document was something cool to learn about,but it was review.My question is that What are spaces in a cork? Also, how did Robert Hooke find the cells in the cork?This was my writing on my cell theory document!
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Jenk,
I would suggest to have a more interesting topic sentence to make your writing a more quality piece. Also to make a conclusion sentence but try to use something different then to conclude.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth
Dear Elizabeth,
You said to use something different then to conclude,but I didn’t use to conclude so I think you should double check your feedback.Also you said “Also to make a conclusion sentence but try to use something different then to conclude.It doesn’t really make sense.
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Mr. Miller and Peers,
For our daily question or comment I would like to present something that I have learned!
Learning is something that happens to you everyday, and I think it is very important. One thing that I learned was that you can weigh different on other planets. That task was valuable because it got me thinking about how scientists can figure out what the gravitational force on different planets. I will do some research on how scientists did there investigations to find out the different gravitational pulls of each planet. I will report back as soon as I acquire my results.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Batiste
Dear Peers,
I would like to show you my comment of today for what I’ve learned!
Mr.Miller has gave my class a comma worksheet,and after I worked on it I improved by a lot! This comma worksheet has turned me trying to remember to put a comma to it being a skill.Now whenever I write a sentence I’m allows putting the comma in the right spot now! Thanks to this document it has helped me a lot!
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Jenk,
I liked how you put your fact that you learned from yesterday, but you have some mistakes. When you were saying that the comma worksheet has changed you from trying to remember to put a comma in to it being a skill, I think that you should of added “from” in your sentence right in between “me” and “turned”. In addition, in the sentence when you said “Now whenever I write a sentence I’m allows putting the comma in the right spot now.” were you trying to say “Now whenever I write a sentence it allows me to put the comma in the right spot.”?
Dear Nick and Jenk,
I respect both of your efforts in the blog, I also think it’s a great thing that people are using the blog for many things. However, I would like to correct both of you on, the spelling of always. In both your paragraphs you spelt always as “allows”.
Dear Class,
I would like to correct my last post in that I forgot to write “sincerely, Jacob.
Best Regards,
Jacob
Dear Nick Barbieri,
I noticed that you made some mistakes in your last blog entry. First, at the beginning of your fourth sentence you started with a lower-case “w”, instead of an upper-case “w”. Also, you forgot to put sincerely, Nick Barbieri at the end of the blog entry.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr.Miller,
Thomas Jefferson was a very interesting person and I learned lots of things about him. Such as before he died he had his tombstone made and he engraved his accomplishments into the tombstone. I found this interesting because he did not engrave that he was the third president of the United States and I think that is one of his greatest accomplishments. There are many more facts I know about Thomas Jefferson, but do you know any?
Sincerely,
Jordan Wade
Dear Peers,
I would like to show you my rough draft of my learning target!
Learning Target
These are two of my many learning targets I want to achieve this year.My learning target for my 5th grade class is to improve in math and science because they are my favorite subjects in school.I also chose them because they are really important subjects in life and school!Math and science are sometimes used together like in science to figure out problems to create an invention or a theory you would need to use math to help you in scientific problems. Well, as you can see I really want to improve in math and science this year!
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Scholars,
As you all know we are learning about Frederick Douglass. I have found a mini bio on Frederick Douglass I think is useful to our learning about him.
P.S. If you click on this tab and it doesn’t work copy and paste it onto your search bar.
https://video.search.yahoo.com/video/play;_ylt=A0LEViPTx5ZWRBUAaLknnIlQ;_ylu=X3oDMTByMjB0aG5zBGNvbG8DYmYxBHBvcwMxBHZ0aWQDBHNlYwNzYw–?p=Fredrick+Douglass&back=https%3A%2F%2Fsearch.yahoo.com%2Fyhs%2Fsearch%3Fp%3DFredrick%2BDouglass%26ei%3DUTF-8%26hsimp%3Dyhs-003%26hspart%3Dmozilla&fr=%26fr%3Dyhs-mozilla-003&turl=http%3A%2F%2Fts4.mm.bing.net%2Fth%3Fid%3DWN.Q21MqaZmwh1zXBqaaCQQ0A%26pid%3D15.1&rurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DSu-4JBEIhXY&tit=Frederick+Douglass+-+Mini+Bio&l=169&vid=a62dcc1f30ea6380a9933652674ddf1f&sigr=11brbq6gs&sigb=12tlm63tn&sigt=10t8nges9&sigi=11vr9f1mf&hspart=mozilla&hsimp=yhs-003
Dear Peers,
I would like to mostly inform Trout members but even if your not in the trout group I suggest you read this. If you search in ‘ Parts of a microscope’ you can print a sheet out and fill in the blanks to know parts of a microscope.( That document will be found if you click on ” parts of a microscope icon’.) Knowing the parts of the microscope will be useful because I believe soon we will use a microscope in class, so why not receive a head start to learning about a microscope and how to use it. This document will also be efficient to trout team members because just like today ( January 5th 2016) we observed trout under a microscope. I hope you find this document useful.
Sincerely,
Justin Schlendorf
Dear Justin Schlendorf,
Thank you for the helpful information, and I will be sure to print out the document.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Peers,
I have just wanted to say if you are in the Problem Solvers team Mini Elections are tomorrow.Wonder who will be leader!!
Sincerely,
Jenk Nouri
Dear Peers,
I think that more people should get on the blog more. So in my free time I am going to try to ask people to get on the blog. I suggest to try to do the same, including the students in our E.L.A class. I would like to do this because I feel that more people should get on the blog and post a comment about something to show your diligence and writing skills. Also, about the students in the E.L.A class if they are getting on the blog, try to get them to post a comment to show that you get on the blog.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Anthony,
Speaking of more E.L.A. peers getting on the blog, some E.L.A. peers are coming up for lunch and some are even joining trout! If they are going to join trout, they are going to have go on the blog, and the first time I went on the blog I was watching videos and looking at comments for at least 30 minutes. So they are probably going to do the same thing.
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear Nick,
I saw that the E.L.A kids came up for extra help, I also saw that Justin, and Elizabeth (e.t.c)were helping them post a comment. I posted the comment because I’ve looked on evry part of the blog to see if the E.L.A kids had posted a comment. Also, I wasn’t only referring to the E.L.A kids, I also spoke to two people to try to get on the blog they said that they get just don’t post, I said the way to prove that is by posting a comment. I hope that the people that I spoke to fallow my advice.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Nick,
I know that the E.L.A kids came up to post but thank you for telling me
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear MrMiller,
I know its not the perfect time to join trout but I am very interested in trout.I have wanted to join trout for awhile but I did not know if it was right for me.I have had fish for a long time and I have always helped my dad clean the tank.I think it would be very interesting to learn about the bacteria Ph that forms in the trout tank .If I can learn about trout and everything that forms in the tank if I get trout in the future I will already know all about the tank.
Hi guys,
I love the videos that Mr.Miller put on the web site you should see them all.😀📚✏️📓
Dear Mr. Miller,
Will the corrections for the quiz on atoms and engineering be due before or after the initiative?
Sincerely,
Sophia Salamone
Dear Mr. Miller,
I would like to be one of the writers for the class paper. I would like to because it would help me write neater and help me write in script more fluently. It would also, increase my vocabulary, and would make me think harder before I write. Finally, it would force me to re-read more than three times, and when I’m re-reading it would make me look for more than does it make sense, does it have correct vocabulary, and does it have correct punctuation.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Nick Barbieri and Peers,
Thank you for the wish of good luck and good luck to you that you win speaker of the house, and good luck to all peers.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear peers,
I wish you guys all of luck tomorrow for the elections, I hope you guys have really good speeches and get the position that you guys want. Good luck!
Sincerely,
Nick barbieri
Dear Mr. Miller,
Do you know when our next computer lab extra help is?
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Anthony,
In the text it said you will be reading about the 8 European explorers who came to the Americas. Anthony it says the Americas because there talking about the North America and the South America.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth Suda
Dear Elizabeth,
When you wrote the response to the question I asked you forgot to put quotation marks at the beginning and end of the answer. You would need to quotations at the beginning and end of the answer because it came from the text, therefore, you would need quotations.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
P.S.
Thank you for the answer
Dear Mr. Miller,
In the social studies text it said” in chapter 5 you read about eight European explores who came to the Americas”. Why dose the text say Americas?
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Anthony,
When you were asking your question I realized that you wrote does wrong, you wrote it dose.
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear peers,
I would just like to remind you guys that we have a complex quiz tomorrow on pages 73-79. I suggest that you reread and study those pages. Good luck!
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear Mr. Miller,
When we were going over the Three Branches of the U.S. Government before you said that if you didn’t finish the document to do it for homework, I did question five at the rug.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr. Miller and Peers,
I would like to come in for extra help tomorrow to work on character traits. I suggest to come in if you need to work on character traits to come in or if you need additional help with anything else.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
P.S.
Computer lab time stars at 8:30, and extra help starts at 8:00.
Dear Anthony Jean-Baptiste,
When you were writing your P.S. note, you spelled starts wrong. You spelled stars instead of starts.
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear Nick Barbieri,
Thank you for pointing out my mistake.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr. Miller,
I forgot my homework folder in the classroom, is there any way I can go on a scholastic news website or can I make it up in class?
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear peers,
In my last comment when I wrote sincerely Jordan twice.
Sincerely
Jordan Reyes-Wade
Dear Jordan Reyes Wade,
I noticed that in your comment you forgot to write a comma after “Sincerely”.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear peers,
I would like to show you a link I found to practice your math skills.
amzn://apps/android?asin=B00N9L9QKMSincerely,
Sincerely,
Jordan Reyes-Wade
Dear Jordan,
In your sentence you wrote sincerely twice.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean Baptiste
Dear Mr. Miller,
You know how we have to go on Raz – kids each week. Are we aloud to change our robot and design our rocket. Or would we be only aloud to read and take tests.
Sincerely,
Olina
Dear Olina,
You are permitted to modify the design.
Sincerely,
Mr.Miller
Dear Mr. Miller,
I would like to present my character traits writing piece. Character traits are great aspects to have if you are part of history or not. Character traits are what makes you; you. If you are part of history you would plenty of character traits. Being a courageous person if you are part of history is a great achievement. It is a good character trait because if you have to go to court you need to have the courage win also you need to have fear to have courage and you might be fearful that you are not going to win, but if keep on believing in your self and showing courage you might just win. Showing courage is a great aspect to show. Courage can help you with many goals in life. As you can see, if you are part of history or not, being courageous and showing courage is a great character trait to have, even if it shows that you are a little scared.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr. Miller and Peers,
In my character traits writing I made a few mistakes. First, I forgot to put to between courage and win. Second, I forgot need between would and plenty. Finally, I forgot to put a comma after win in the sentence when I said, if you are going to court you would need to have the courage to win, also you need to have fear to have courage.
Sincerely,
Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr. Miller:
I have a question, remember that you said that the plates
make earthquakes and volcanos, so how the plates makes tsunamis.
Thank you for your colaboration.
Sincerely,
Xavier Piedra.
Dear Xavier, I noticed when you asked your question you wrote ‘so how the plates make tsunamis’.The correct way to say the sentence would be ‘so how do the plates make tsunamis’.I also believe that I can answer your question. I think that the plates don’t cause tsunamis. I think that the earthquakes that plates cause, make the tsunamis happen. Sincerely, Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr.Miller, I would like to be someone to manage the sports games. I would like to join because it seems like a really fun job to have. I would also like to join because it would help increase my memory skills. Sincerely, Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Anthony,
Currently, Jordan and Sophia have assumed the role of commissioners. However, should they require additional help, your name will be first on the list.
Sincerely,
Mr. Miller
Dear Mr. Miller, Thank you for having me as an assistant for Jordan and Sophia as a commissioner if help is needed. Sincerely, Anthony Jean-Baptiste
Dear Mr.Miller and peers ,
May I come in for the computer extra help?I want to finish up my numbers chart and paragraph.Peers if you want to finish up or start your numbers you could come in for computer extra help.And also we will be starting up baseball next week or tomorrow.If anyone wants to join that would be great because we need more people to join in order to play the game.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng.
Dear Mr.Miller,
Justin and I would be coming in for extra help with the third graders.We will be all coming in at 8:00.Our cohort wanted to finish our design process chart in order to start engineering.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Mr. Miller,
On the website I founded the page that was about Roanoke.There was a lot of facts that didn’t really make sence. Like there was this fact about queen Elizabeth giving Sir Walter Raleigh a charter. At first I didn’t know what charter means bit then I looked it up in the dictionary.Charter means to hire[as a bus or an aircraft]for temporary use.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear peers,
I would just like to remind you there is a quiz on geography. There might be a quiz on the pages we read the previous day in your science fusion text book.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth Suda
Dear Mr.Miller,
Last week I was not able to post a comment on the blog,
so I would like to share my thoughts about how it went. I feel
I have learned a fantastic amount of information during E.L.A.,
like the words adhere and ascend. Adhere means to stick or
follow speaking figuratively. Ascend means to rise or go up.
I have also learned in math double division and I reviewed long
division. There is so many things I learned that I can’t share them all
in this comment.
Sincerely,
Justin Schlendorf
Dear Mr.Miller,
I found the answer to my question,”is Denmark part of Greenland?”. The answer is that Greenland is a province of Denmark.
Sincerely,
Nick Barbieri
Dear,Mr. Miller
Today you asked me what gives glue it’s adhesive properties . I have done research and come up with an answer. My answer is adhesion . Adhesion is when liquid molecules stick to other types of molecules . This force force makes glue stick to objects such as paper, metal and wood .
Sincerely, Jacob
Dear Mr.Miller
Today was good and quick. I hope everyday is like this, this week. I also wanted to say that I would hopefully attend extra help more often. One more thing is that I will study hard for quizzes because I want to keep up my good scores.🙂
Sincerely,
Nicholas McBride
Dear, Peers
I would like to remind you all that we have a timeline and Vikings worksheet quiz tomorrow. For this quiz I would like give you all good luck. P.S. Don’t forget to study!😉
Sincerely, Jacob Gabel
Dear Jacob Gabel,
Thank you for reminding the class about the timeline quiz . I appreciate you for reminding the class about the timeline quiz but I noticed that you made a mistake in your comment. When you wrote “dear peers” you wrote the comma after the dear . Where you was were supposed to put the comma was after the dear peers.
Sincerely，Olina Zheng😊
DEAR CLASSMATES,
I WOULD LIKE TO REMIND YOU GUYS THAT WE HAVE A CLASS DISCUSSION ON THE SOVEREIGHN STATE DOCUMENT.
Dear Jake Neira,
When you posted your comment about the class discussion you capitilized the whole thing.I also noticed that you forgot to write “Sincerely,Jake Neira or Jake.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Mr.Miller,
On the website is there any additional exponents worksheets that I can print out?
Dear Jake Neira,
I noticed that you forgot to write “Sincerely, Jake Neira on this comment too.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear classmates,
I found this cool video on YouTube that I thought you might like to see. Here is the link:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MSA88mmFuyE&autoplay=1
have a goodnight, Paige
Dear Paige Driscoll,
Thank you for the video on latitude and longitude lines.I thought that the video was cool and I learned a lot from the video.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Mr. Miller,
I really like the rounding we are doing in math, at first I didn’t really understand it but now it’s starting to come through easier and I’m very glad I do. Another thing that I wanted to say is I plan on going to extra help tomarrow,I wanted to catch up in some things.
Sincerely,
Nicholas McBride
Dear Nicholas Mcbride,
In your last comment in the second sentence you spelled tomorrow wrong.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth
Dear Mr.Miller,
I am dearly sorry I have actually found the area where the
account sheet was.
Sincerely,
Justin Schlendorf
Dear Mr.Miller,
I could not find the account sheet to print out, so if you could let me know where it is that would be helpful.
Sincerely,
Justin Schlendorf
Dear Mr.Miller,
I am going to come into challenge sessions tomorrow so if there are any tests this week I would like to study for it.
Sincerely,
Justin Schlendorf
Dear Luis Maximo,
Thank You for reminding the whole class about the geography quiz and wishing them good luck!
I realized that when you wrote “Sincerly Luis Maximo” you spelled sincerely wrong.The sincerely you spelled was sincerly but how you really spell it is S-i-n-c-e-r-e-l-y.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Olina Zeng,
I noticed to that you forgot a comma in your writing.
Sincerely,
Justin Schlendorf
Dear class,
Just as a remainder there is a geography quiz tomorrow,
I wish good luck to all of you.Don’t forget to study!:)
Sincerly,
Luis Maximo
Dear Elizabeth Suda,
I recognized that you as well forgot a comma when you were
writing. Just a reminder for next time.
Sincerely,
Justin Schlendorf
Dear Brianna Howard,
I recognized that you forgot a comma when you wrote
‘Dear Mr.Miller’, so just remember when you write ‘Dear Mr.Miller’ don’t forget a comma.
Sincerely,
Justin Schlendorf
Dear Mr.Miller
For the flame challenge I would like to do sound . I picked sound because sound is an interesting topic and there is so much to learn abouut it! That is why I will Pick sound.
Sincerly,
Makayla Amatuegwu
Dear Makayla
I noticed in one of you comments you spelled about wrong. Just reminder for next time.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth
Dear Elizabeth,
I noticed that when you wrote a comment to Makayla you made a mistake. When you wrote “Dear Makayla” you forgot to put a comma after Makayla.
Sincerely,
Olina Zheng
Dear Mr. Miller
I would like to be apart of the flame challenge because I think it will be really fun and it will also be a great experience
sincerely,
Brianna
Dear Brianna,
I would like to say that you forgot a comma after Mr.Miller and you forgot a period at the end of your sentence.
Sincerely,
Nick
Dear Brianna Howard,
You forgot to do a period at the end of your last sentence. Just remember next time to put a period.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth Suda
Dear Mr.Miller,
I would like to do what is sound because sound is everywhere and sound could save you’r life.
If there was a car or train coming if there was no sound you would get ran over.
It also seems very interesting.
Sincerely,
Jordan Reyes-Wade
Dear Mr.Miller,
I found the answer to the question that you asked me in literacy block today. The answer is that penguins are warm blooded. So now I can ask the question to ponder in literacy block.
Dear Nick Barbieri,
I noticed that in your comment you forgot to write “Sincerely Nick or Nicholas Barbieri”.
Sincerely, Olina Zheng
Dear Mr.Miller,
I will express interest in the flame challenge beacause I like grading stuff and playing teacher. Plus science is my most favorite subject so this is a great opportunity for the class, and this is deffidently somthing to be apart of!
Dear Mr. Miller,
I would like to do the flame challenge because I like science. I think it would be very interesting to see scientists and their works of science. Also I think it would be good experience for me. Thank you.
Sincerely, Jordan Reyrs-Wade